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Fold, rethink, unfold.
Poetry pearled in paper,
What shape do you take?
Written May 15, 2014, about how life can be so alternately beautiful and frustrating. I know that, at least for this blind chick, origami is both fascinating and a bitch--I kind of had a love-hate relationship with it in elementary school, lol. Anyway, this is about how I feel after today ... like I'm not sure whether to comb my hair or pull it all out, ha.

This is part of my unintentional "Life in [Insert Concept Here]" haiku series. Similar works follow:

Life in BlocksBuild, collapse, rebuild.
Mama, I don't want to play
This game anymore.


Life in CatchSo many curveballs ...
I've never been great at catch.
Guess I ought to learn.
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
"Poetry pearled in paper" :heart:
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hopeburnsblue Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
 Isn't alliteration awesome? Bahaha.
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TristanCody Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Student Writer
And BOOM. Did anyone hear that? That was the sound of a thousand philosophy books being turned into paper airplanes and cranes. 
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hopeburnsblue Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:blush:
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MaryBalderrama Featured By Owner May 16, 2014   General Artist
I love this! It popped out at me while browsing the DA poetry section and then I found out it was your excellent writing, blackoutpoet. :)
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hopeburnsblue Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha how neat! Glad you like!
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Delice1941 Featured By Owner May 16, 2014
Nice one:rose:
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shep4life Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Simple yet complex - like a marble
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hopeburnsblue Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Exactly what I was aiming for. :heart: Thank you for the :+fav:.
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shep4life Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome much!
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